I think this is my favorite page of what you put out so far- between the layout and the dialogue everything flows very nicely as dramatic buildup. The last panel is particularly good, does a great job of giving the character an intimidating presence. I'm interested to see where this goes!
Thank you! That's high praise. This page was important, being the first lines of dialogue in the story so far, so I did mull over the words and layout a bit. Glad youre liking it!
Posted by OsmiumOrchid 5 years ago Report
I think this is my favorite page of what you put out so far- between the layout and the dialogue everything flows very nicely as dramatic buildup. The last panel is particularly good, does a great job of giving the character an intimidating presence. I'm interested to see where this goes!
Posted by Itsuune 5 years ago Report
Thank you! That's high praise. This page was important, being the first lines of dialogue in the story so far, so I did mull over the words and layout a bit. Glad youre liking it!