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I like to describe the characters because it makes it easier for me to imagine them, and to be able to carry out the story. Please add tags and comment if you find any errors ...
Posted by JackSpades 5 years ago Report
Extensive use of the male pronouns he/his instead of the female she/her. And maybe some spelling errors I didn't catch.
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Posted by vuurdraak249 5 years ago Report
indeed he/his/him instead of she/her.
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Posted by Krunchlesnitchles 5 years ago Report
you used his and he instead of she and her for almost all of it
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