Oh my, this story is really good in fact. It turned me on several times.
I know how long it takes to write a good story. Not need to see it is a nice job, and really hope you can continue.
If there were a Nobel Prize for Fetish Literature this jewel'd really deserve to win! I could easily feel the tension climax through the tale, wondering if she's dare to chop or show mercy. Strong point was the love/objectification between the main characters, and also the idea of sacrifice yourself (well, a part actually) to see the lover happy.
Also the conversation with the sister was hot, giving a spicy flavour of incest. Also loved all the preparation stuff but there's the mystery in the end about the used recipe.
Hope you have a lot more in the store. It'd be intriguing to know what the sister has planned for Jim, the special relationship between Kat and her mom, and the general follow up of the characters.
I not much of a cook, so I never game much thought on to cook said parts. In this case I think it adds to the story when the reader can envision how it cooked.
Posted by Naivejohn 4 years ago Report
Oh my, this story is really good in fact. It turned me on several times.
I know how long it takes to write a good story. Not need to see it is a nice job, and really hope you can continue.
Posted by tvulture 4 years ago Report
Thank you.
I plan writing more.
Posted by coxjames 4 years ago Report
If there were a Nobel Prize for Fetish Literature this jewel'd really deserve to win! I could easily feel the tension climax through the tale, wondering if she's dare to chop or show mercy. Strong point was the love/objectification between the main characters, and also the idea of sacrifice yourself (well, a part actually) to see the lover happy.
Also the conversation with the sister was hot, giving a spicy flavour of incest. Also loved all the preparation stuff but there's the mystery in the end about the used recipe.
Hope you have a lot more in the store. It'd be intriguing to know what the sister has planned for Jim, the special relationship between Kat and her mom, and the general follow up of the characters.
Congrats Again!
James
Posted by tvulture 4 years ago Report
Thanks.
I not much of a cook, so I never game much thought on to cook said parts. In this case I think it adds to the story when the reader can envision how it cooked.