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Vegan for the Holidays By tvulture -- Report

Uploaded: 5 years ago

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A simple short story of a teenager making usual trouble for her mother.

Expect the plan backfires.

The holiday is whatever the reader choose.

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Teruyo

Posted by Teruyo 5 years ago Report

I really like the concept, but the execution is a bit lacking. I take it English isn't your first language, so would you mind if I fixed it up a bit? I could do anything from some simple editing to rewriting entire sections.

tvulture

Posted by tvulture 5 years ago Report

English is my first language. I do have trouble with tense. Other than that...

As for fixing it up. Please go ahead. I would love to see the changes.