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In the story of these two, Casey and C. live in a lab that tests medications and medicines. Their lab doesn't receive a lot of funding, so the researchers are really at the mercy of their funders.
I really want to make better comics in the future, so please leave any helpful tips
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Posted by THEDEMONWARLOCK 5 years ago Report
If you're going to blur dialogue to sort of impair our understand or perhaps leave things ambiguous I'd suggest instead remove them or fill the boxes with indistinct chatter. Something akin to wavy lines on a peace of paper. Otherwise, if said information is important to the reader then it shouldn't be blurred.
Otherwise! Amazing work! :D
For those wondering what it says (From left to right):
"Tongue shows significant muscle growth."
"Injecting subject with pernicious? enhancement and elastify? serum."
"Subject should begin feeling the effects of the serum within the next five minutes."
"Begin lowering consumptive subject #273"
Posted by THEDEMONWARLOCK 5 years ago Report
Also also, might I also suggest making a comics folder and place all yours pages in a seperate folder titled the comic's name. I feel it would make it much easier to access the comic if it isn't in two places. I was wondering where the other page was when I pressed prev and didn't find it.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report
I don't think the prey consented to this testing