Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story. Yeah I have in mind sort of a trilogy about her. Found her misadventures were easy to write about so I think I'll keep using the character.
I love that the 'vomiting the prey back up' was clearly always on the very brink of happening if she stopped resisting, rather than a 'success' of the prey or benevolent giving in of the predator. It's a nice twist.
That and the fact she was still 100% ready to force a fully clothed policeman into the mire. I'm honestly a little disappointed he didn't stray closer!
Posted by dcvfgb1234 4 years ago Report
Quite liked the story. It was an interesting arch you had and Lexi's escape was fun. Planning on doing something more with her?
Posted by Dreamender 4 years ago Report
Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story. Yeah I have in mind sort of a trilogy about her. Found her misadventures were easy to write about so I think I'll keep using the character.
Posted by soline 4 years ago Report
Wonderful story!
I love that the 'vomiting the prey back up' was clearly always on the very brink of happening if she stopped resisting, rather than a 'success' of the prey or benevolent giving in of the predator. It's a nice twist.
That and the fact she was still 100% ready to force a fully clothed policeman into the mire. I'm honestly a little disappointed he didn't stray closer!
Posted by ifdre 4 years ago Report
So, are the eaten people all alive and spat out safely?
Posted by Sycamore 2 years ago Report
Holy shit, what a ride. This is one of the best things I've ever read on here!
Shame none of the girls had been digested by the time she gave them up :p