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Gustav the human is having problems with his Naga boyfriend called Alex. Alex wants them to partake in a particular fetish of his but Gustav isn't exactly thrilled.
This feels like my first proper story on this site. I'm pretty proud of it but i would gladly like to hear criticism for it if there is any.
Otherwise i might have a sequel planned for this but considering how long this one took me and how infrequently i upload, it will take a looooong time.
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Posted by renearrechiga 5 years ago Report
That was really good I loved the description of the change of idea in Gustavs mind, finding the sub part of the vore and loving it, personally I would like more details in the swallow part but it is a good story
Posted by TastesUndivided 5 years ago Report
Yeah i have always been pretty bad at the swallowing part. So i'll try to improve that next time. Otherwise i'm glad you like the description. I try to focus a lot on what is happening in people's heads.
Posted by TastesUndivided 4 years ago Report
Thanks for showing interest. I have currently not planned a sequel to this, but i might be doing similar stories in the future. My release are very slow though because of my busy life unfortunately.