Saw your post on the forum and decided to drop on in. I really like how you let dialogue carry the plot! That style is done quite effectively here, and I can tell that you were having fun giving each of the characters a distinct voice and personality.
There's a saying in show business: never work with children of animals...
Small addendum: I notice that the author-added tags were neat and to-the-point, but don't fear going a little hog-wild with those, as long as they're accurate. Tag following is how people discover things here. This is something I've recently been reminded of, so I feel obligated to pay it forward.
Posted by ObsidianSnake 5 years ago Report
Saw your post on the forum and decided to drop on in. I really like how you let dialogue carry the plot! That style is done quite effectively here, and I can tell that you were having fun giving each of the characters a distinct voice and personality.
There's a saying in show business: never work with children of animals...
Posted by ObsidianSnake 5 years ago Report
Small addendum: I notice that the author-added tags were neat and to-the-point, but don't fear going a little hog-wild with those, as long as they're accurate. Tag following is how people discover things here. This is something I've recently been reminded of, so I feel obligated to pay it forward.
Posted by sandramudd 5 years ago Report
Thanks for reading, the kind words, the forum endorsement and the tips! Really appreciate it!
Posted by delet0b269gv26 5 years ago Report
I kinda wish Laurie had taken Harper's offer and fed herself to the pig.
Posted by sandramudd 5 years ago Report
Sounds like a good idea for a sequel!