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Hello again! I finished writing another story, this one a lot longer than the first one (5,916 words) and with a bit more vore to go along with it. It's only fair, right?
Once again, this story was written as if it could've happened in HipHugger's universe. And like before, this doesn't mean it did actually happen: its just something I wrote that maybe could've occurred all those years ago.
So, a little blurb to give you a feel for what lies ahead: this story follows a witch OC of mine, Valérie McLaren, as she learns that her good friend Lien "Smith" is actually a voracious succubus way back in 1707. McLaren, a survivor of the purge at Salem that had claimed several of her sisters, is forced not only to deal with a strong adversary but also some traumatizing flashbacks of what she had experienced back in 1693...
This story has gone through countless revisions and edits over the past four months, including a lot of story direction changes. It's really the one I wanted to post here first, but I couldn't write the climax in a way that satisfied me until yesterday. Then all I needed to do was give it an ending and well, here it is.
NOTE: the characters of Lien, Amber Adams, Abigail Williams, Betty Parris and Fawnia are all creations of the amazing https://aryion.com/g4/user/HipHugger
(Used with permission)
Valérie, Belle, Imogen, Sappho, Clementine, Charlotte and Caroline are all original characters of mine. They'll all get fleshed out in other stories that are being worked on in due time.
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Posted by HipHugger 5 years ago Report
This is a neat little story :) Very entertaining
Posted by Neptune909 5 years ago Report
Thanks! I was trying to tell a decent story that contained vore in it, but I got worried that the whole thing could turn into a slog of bad writing.
I also just learned today that Abigail Williams and Betty Parris were actual people involved in the trial, I legit thought you made them up! I was working on a piece with Abigail as the main "antagonist" and searched her name randomly just to see if anyone shared the name. Naturally, I jumped down a Wikipedia rabbit hole of names and facts I now want to play with. One such fact was that apparently Abigail was 11 when she accused others of witchcraft. I spent a good portion of today laughing over lil Abbie the leader of the Sisters of Salem throwing the older witches under the bus lol.
Posted by HipHugger 5 years ago Report
XD Keeping their memory alive with vore
Posted by VVVx 5 years ago Report
Good story, glad it didn't end with Lien eating her friend.
Posted by Neptune909 5 years ago Report
Thanks friend. There was a brief time where I thought this wouldn't make much sense, but eventually came to the conclusion that someone like Lien, who loves to exert power and manipulation on an unwitting populace would love to be friends with witches who do that. Granted, Valerie isn't exactly "wicked" like the others but she is a capitalist who sells medicine to people for both personal pleasure and profit.
Posted by Neptune909 5 years ago Report
Thanks friend. There was a brief time where I thought this wouldn't make much sense, but eventually came to the conclusion that someone like Lien, who loves to exert power and manipulation on an unwitting populace would love to be friends with witches who do that. Granted, Valerie isn't exactly "wicked" like the others but she is a capitalist who sells medicine to people for both personal pleasure and profit.