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Proud Of Her Poop (Updated) By Rat_Guy -- Report

I was never happy with the ending of the original story and I've wanted to rewrite it since I first posted it. I also took this opportunity to expand some other parts of the story.

I'll keep the old one up in case someone wants to read it, but it's dead to me.

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harpylove

Posted by harpylove 3 years ago Report

I like it. It's fun and cute.

aadel57

Posted by aadel57 2 years ago Report

Your story took me by surprise and I enjoyed it - that he came out alive and said to her: You are my poop, it drove me crazy!
I wish I could be eaten in his place!
But the end could have been better and eaten again and turned into real poop

Rat_Guy

Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report

Glad you liked it. If that's the ending you would have preferred then you can read the original story and imagine that as an epilogue.

aadel57

Posted by aadel57 2 years ago Report

I always have such fantasies and I enjoy them - even in my stories I turn into poop

aadel57

Posted by aadel57 2 years ago Report

i wish i was Dennis!