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So this is my first work here, if you have a critic (positive or negative) i'm glad to read it and how it says up there i apologise if something is hard to understand.
See you all soon!
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Posted by Persona59523 5 years ago Report
Besides spelling and somewhat poor use of grammer, the story is pretty good.
Posted by TBVAS2 5 years ago Report
Hey thanks! i will have it in mind :)