In light of positive feedback, I decided to just plow through as-is building off of the pilot chapter.

I feel a lot more confident about chapter 2, I think there's a timidness and excitability of this Mega Man that I've nailed. The more analytical thought narration that I thought clashed with the dialogue in chapter 1 lends itself to some really cool introspective stuff in chapter 2.

Something that I didn't clearly spell out in chapter 1, but might go back and make an edit for....is that in this series Mega Man essentially has a more powerful alt-fire for each boss weapon that he has to use from his butt!

The thumbnail art is cropped from a Mega Man in-game sprite.

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