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Well, I was told to keep it up, so I did!
Thank you everyone who favorited and commented on my first vore drawing. It really meant a lot to me! I hope you will like this even more when it’s done.
Here is where I was before for comparison: https://aryion.com/g4/view/596909 What do you think?
This is something I’m working on. It’s going to be a sequence. (The lazy kind where I only change the belly and expression between pages.) It will also be colored and shaded.
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Posted by threk 4 years ago Report
Hair looks great and the body's nice and curvy.
Face is good too but could maybe use some work to look more natural, maybe have a go doing a practice sheet of different expressions? (After I actually read the description properly,) if you're doing a sequence of different expressions that could be good practice too.
Lastly the knees are slightly wonky; different heights and slightly too narrow, but easy to fix. Joints are one of the harder parts to get looking proportional, so check out whatever reference material you can find and keep preacticing :)
Posted by FlyingTMan 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the input!
Yeah, I already thought her face looked a little off. (Maybe even a little psychotic.) I'll try to tweak it and see if I can fix it. I'm sure it will look better once she has someone in her belly and I give her a more pleasured expression.
I'll adjust the knees too. Although, one knee would be a little "higher" that the other because the viewer is looking slightly downward on her and she is standing at an angle, but I probably went too far with that. I'll level them out a bit and see if that's better.
I'll probably notice and fix even more flaws when I shade it.