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A story of a bloaty gyaru, people eating, burps, and lots of sex.
Also a wonderful commission I got from Brazzel!
Also doesn't actually feature Gal, but her belly makes for a close enough icon.
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Posted by komaedz 4 years ago Report
no exaggeration, this is simply one of the best vore stories i’ve ever read. the descriptions, dialogue, and scenario are all inventive but evidently deeply thought out and perfectly executed. i’m absolutely biased as a fan of dismissive preds and burping in general, but i’d love to see more like this because i know i’d be kicking myself if there turned out never to be anything else this good. excellent work from the both of you and thank you so much for sharing!
Posted by pbysteria 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! As another fan of both those things, Brazzel did an excellent job with it.
Posted by Siorche 4 years ago Report
holy shit dude this is good :eyes:
Posted by pbysteria 4 years ago Report
big agree :ok_hand:
Posted by ReiREND 4 years ago Report
well, a unespected ending for me, but i am good with it(Lucky bastard gunther!).
Posted by Restrogenic 4 years ago Report
See now, I'm not a fan of fatal vore. But this, this was nice. The build-up however left me disappointed with both of their deaths. Personally, I think it would have been better if Mel broke up with Gunther after being released having seen how quick he was to just bang another girl at her whims. That, coupled with Britney's seemingly growing attraction to Gunther made me think they could end up together instead. So while it was a great story for vore, I feel that that story was rather flat and two dimensional.
7/10
Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report
I agree entirely. I get why people like bad endings, But in this instance i would have preferred a good ending. But hey, that's just me.
Posted by Dashmaster13 4 years ago Report
Aw man, I kinda hoped mei will live, oh well its a great story so i dont matter 9/10
Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report
A fun to read story.
Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report
I’m only seeing around 4 paragraphs, halp
Posted by pbysteria 4 years ago Report
Is there a scroll bar for it? Eka's pdf display works fine on things I have tried (firefox, chrome)
Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report
I use mobile, on safari
Posted by Draconatedz 4 years ago Report
Amazing story dude, job well done. The pacing was just right.
Posted by pbysteria 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report
Really hope this pred makes a return!