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If you've read my work.
And it made you grin.
Plus you've got spare coin.
And the times aren't thin.
If you hope for more.
Cause it brightens your day.
Then I hope you'll consider.
Slinging change my way.
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Posted by C107galaxytachyon 4 years ago Report
Question: exactly where is Troy’s location by the end of this chapter?
Posted by Andris 4 years ago Report
A coffee shop in western Liverpool.
Posted by Bautunnick 4 years ago Report
One Mary to rule them all, One Mary to find them,
One Mary to bring them all and in the colon bind them.
Really hoping for the continuation. This story is very enjoyable to read.
It would be interesting if Claudia was gradually "corrupted" by the kinky will of Mary while wearing the ring=)
I can't help but root for Claudia a little bit though (even though she is unlikely to have any chance to win). Recruiting new members for the villain rights protection association here=)
Posted by Andris 4 years ago Report
=) Shhhh, don't spoil things! But I'm glad you enjoy the story. I'll work on the next chapter, I'm pretty well into it already.
Posted by Bautunnick 4 years ago Report
Yeah... Sorry for that. I really wish there was an "Edit" button.
Also, I kinda forgot to ask something. This is about previous chapters, so I'm not spoiling anything, I hope. In the very beginning Mary was kinda willing to have Troy suffocated. And she didn't have any idea she needed to consciously keep her tiny alive. That, and a borderline drawn between "Troy" and "other tinies" surviving the treatment made me think that Troy became not only telepathic, but also virtually indestructible either while tiny or at any size. But during the "training" Troy actually started to suffocate before the Lady provided him with her energy. So, how exactly does this work, if you don't mind answering? Or perhaps some explanation will be disclosed in the later chapters?
P.S. Sorry for being so prying. Your writing style seems easy and interesting to read to me and I became captivated by the story.
Posted by Andris 4 years ago Report
No problem at all, I appreciate having readers with questions. Mary's wish made Troy's fantasy real, and part of that was invulnerability to harm by a giantess at tiny size. The Lady is the only exception, for reasons that will become clearer later but ultimately involve her greater mastery of magic. Troy's immunity will pay a role in the story later. And thank you, I'm glad you like my work.