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- "What's up with this candle miss?"
* She does not answer, running a hand through his hair as she looks at the lit candle, the orange glow illuminating her face rather well. *
- Looking around a bit, the boy sees darkness spread in the corner to his left, a candle had just gone out. Looking over he witnesses one of the women engulfing a girl, her head and shoulders being within her maw. Looking to the other corner, the girl there is resting, her hands on her bloated stomach, hearing screams of someone within.
* The girl he's with gently pulls him against her, trying to keep him calm, and not let him look at the others devouring their clients *
- "Please! I don’t want to be here anymore, I’ve changed my mind."
* She gives him an soft look, as if trying to reassure him everything will be alright *
- He sniffled a bit as he realized what was going on, looking at the candle as a few tears rolled down his face, realizing what was happening.
* She gives an almost concerned look, not taking her eyes off of him, seeming to not even be phased by the sounds of people being devoured *
- "…Will it hurt?.."
* She begins to stroke his hair, giving him a loving look, the same kind a mother gives to their child, the act calming him a bit, but making him fear more as he wasn't being given an answer. *
- "That candle…its almost…"
*Her loving looks begins to look more sinister as the darkness begins to go over her face, her rubbing her hand against his cheek to try and calm him as a low growl from her stomach breaks the silence around them *
- The boy watched in horror as the candle flickered out, bathing him in darkness "P-please.. i don't want to be ea-"
*She cuts his words short as she gently takes his face, planting a kiss on his head, before a scream echoes from the room, all the candles being out. *
Thanks MouseBoy for this wonderful atmospheric dialogue piece^^
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Posted by Sitharc 4 years ago Report
Love the horror angle to this, trying to soothe him, despite it not meaning anything in the end.
Bonus if she, legit or not, soothes him farther as he begins to glorp, blorp, and fester in pain.
Posted by sadcat 4 years ago Report
Damn now I wanna see a part 2 of this!!!
Posted by Sitharc 4 years ago Report
Or singing/humming an actual lullaby as he digests.
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
This idea is lovely, I would like to see it
Posted by Altimos 4 years ago Report
Indeed... it would complete the idea of her mentality from beginning to end <3 <3 <3
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
Her mother like character is just perfect, I wish to see more preds like her
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Wonderful idea!
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Don't know about sequel but you will see them again for sure ^^
Posted by Williamso17 4 years ago Report
Ooohh this very nicely done I love terror stuff
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm fond of it too
Posted by Bright 4 years ago Report
I really like the angle of waiting for the candle to go out.
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
It should stand away, as they once accidentally set a fire xD
Posted by Crazycat15 4 years ago Report
very good ^^
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you :3
Posted by whatisthissheet 4 years ago Report
Man this looks scarily comfy. Like goddamn does the lap pillow look comfy but the setting is so scary.
And damn, lap pillows are something I never thought to look at art of, honestly looks pleasing outside of lewd reasons.
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Seems I've managed to convey the idea I wanted to ^^
Posted by KKtheneko 4 years ago Report
I really like this, the attempted comforting is great
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thanx! ^^
Posted by Cactaur98 4 years ago Report
This is a very unique scenario that I would love to see more of! This is top tier stuff!
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you! I appreciate ^^
Posted by ShamefulInterest 4 years ago Report
Oh, for the love of god tell me we'll get more pictures like this or a part two! ❤.❤
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
More pictures like this. Promised.
Posted by ShamefulInterest 4 years ago Report
^^ I'd give you a gold star if I had one same goes for MouseBoy you two nailed it yo ushould feel proud both of you!
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
Before I start, I want to say.... JESUS CHRIST LOOK AT THOSE MASSIVE THIGHS OH MY LORD.
And now for my comment, this drawing is so creepy and I just love it. Horror aspect in vore makes it even better for me. Also, this story is so well written and this idea is so mysterious (Like, "where is this happening ?", "Who are these women ?"), which adds more creepiness. I know MouseBoy, I had no idea he is so good at writing. And this girl's mother like character is actually so on point, I would love to see more preds like her
And more about drawing: shadows, candles light and smoke, girl's calming smile and scared expression of the boy, those bulges in the tummy of the other girl - literally everything is well made, I don't know if there is anything bad I can say about it... for now at least.
Great work, I hope you will make more original and cool drawings like that !
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Oh, thanks! I appreciate your comments as always :)
Yes. MouseBoy is really great in writting. He has a talent.
These women has their own lore, I'm just not ready to present it yet, but I will one day ^^
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
Ohhh my, I am excited now. And I am glad to know that you enjoy my comments)
Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 4 years ago Report
This is glorious
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by meepstercreepster 4 years ago Report
this definitely needs to be expanded upon
Posted by Shevron 4 years ago Report
Thank you! Will be
Posted by gva274 4 years ago Report
This is fantastic!
Posted by joeburp22181 4 years ago Report
Sexi!
Posted by ShinjiIkari 4 years ago Report
This is awesome and so is the dialogue. Well done.
Posted by Undernom 4 years ago Report
A terrifyingly sweet little blurb, a wonderful addition~
Posted by devittshao 4 years ago Report
This is extremely good! Hoping to see it continued <3
Posted by Mordecai777 4 years ago Report
I would love to see a second part of this, it is simply amazing i reckon it would be a great success.
Posted by Impact 4 years ago Report
Don't know where this place is, but I'd like an appointment.
Posted by SherlokKirya 2 years ago Report
Coming back to this masterpiece after 2 years. I can only hope more horror/thriller vores will be made in the future. This and another piece with tinies on a frying pan are showing that you can do spooky and I love it.
Also props for quite an original concept. Cheers !