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First time trying to write a fetish story. Somewhat satisfied with how this came out. Would appreciate any feedback you happen to have - I'd like to improve my writing!
Also be forewarned this is fairly out of character. Sorry about that!
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Posted by Lokalhjul 4 years ago Report
You're the guy from /d/ right?
It's a great story, especially for a first timer! The paragraphs breaks and the text formatting are excellent, so is the first person prose.
Sothis is smuuug and cruel. OOC yes, but don't let canon get in the way of stories!
As said, solid writing! Hope to see more from you in the future.
Posted by Nozo 4 years ago Report
Thanks! I hope to put out more soon.