The swim meet goes poorly, and Anna tries her best to console Dawn.

As always, tags contain spoilers.

Hey, did you know I recently posted a blog with some more one-off ideas? I'm going to be drafting at least one of those over the course of the next week while working on Chapter 5, so if you want to have a say, leave a comment there.

Minor Spoilers Below:
Okay, this one was rough. I basically scrapped three scenes, salvaged the good bits of dialogue, and crafted a new one that did most of the same work. Sorry there's no actual vore, but I really only saw two solutions here.
1) Have a chapter with a disconnected series of events that takes way longer to accomplish the same things but can include a simple grab-and-gulp scene, or
2) Condense the events into a single, fairly short chapter, get everyone where they need to be, and have a nice, punchy setup for the first multi-chapter sequences of the series.

Alternate working chapter of this one was "Anna The Oblivious." Don't blame her, though. She doesn't realize she's one of only two named major characters in the story at this point.

Side note: Extended sequences of dialogue are hard.

Also, enjoy the cliffhanger. It's not going to be the last.

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