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This is the second vore story I've ever shared, haha

Althemia reads a strange passage in a tome found deep in the Halidom. When she tries to find Cleo to question her about the book's content, something interrupts her.

Just like with my first story, I'm really looking for criticism. I think I may have gone overboard in trying to describe Althemia's thought process throughout the story, but I kinda thought she would be the type of person to overthink things and I wanted to express that in my writing. Plus, this is my first time writing Implied Digestion, so I would really like to know how you thought I did!

I love Althemia, so expect more stories of her (and Dragalia in general)! This site needs more Dragalia content, and I am happy to provide. :P

Here's some images of what the characters featured in the story look like for those not familiar with Dragalia:

Althemia: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/dragalialost_gamepedia_en/images/a/ae/110047_01_r05_portrait.png/revision/latest?cb=20200702000103

Sinoa: https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/dragalialost_gamepedia_en/images/4/45/110009_01_r05_portrait.png/revision/latest?cb=20200701235524

The story belongs to me, but the characters are © Cygames Inc. and Nintendo Co., Ltd.

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MugenNoSaga

Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report

Not necessary related to the story, but the links in the description doesn't load because the data ain't in the cookies of the browser of others who try to open them (this same issue happens with pixiv links when ppl try to just grab the random url thing).

OhSevenTen

Posted by OhSevenTen 4 years ago Report

Thank you very much for letting me know. I believe I have fixed it.