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Anna, Chapter 5: Lilly By thecheese01 -- Report

Anna's surprise guest makes their desires clear. It's a bit of a rough start, but the two of them manage to work something out.

Tags contain spoilers, but honestly you know where this is going.

Hey, this took a bit longer than I really wanted it to. In an act of sheer, unbridled genius, I've been splitting my attention perfectly between three projects, ensuring none of them actually release in a timely manner. Obviously I've got both this thing and the prompt #3 story from my latest idea list (which is turning out to be kind of a monster, but I'm hoping to finish it up in the next few days), as well as a secret background project that probably won't see the light of day for a good while. I've actually been pretty damn productive. Something like 20,000 words total in about two weeks (admittedly a lot of first draft stuff, but still).

Going to hold off on an ETA for the next chapter for now, since I really want to finish the next one-off story first, but once that's up expect another idea list and chapter 6 soon after.

Spoilers Below:
Oh boy, here we are. Nearly 6000 words with lots of that vore-ish goodness. Alright, I know there's not actually the final gulp in this one, but bear with me. It's coming. Probably. Also some other stuff.

Also I spent way longer than I should have rewriting that last exchange between Anna and Lilly, for what ultimately amounts to like 8 actual lines of dialogue. I'm still not entirely sure I'm satisfied, but it was something I definitely felt needed to be there.

And hey, told you that previous cliffhanger wouldn't be the last!

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iliketoread

Posted by iliketoread 4 years ago Report

Fantastic work Cheese, I loved this whole chapter. All these cliff hangers are gonna make me go crazy!

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 4 years ago Report

I know! But it's a win-win. It makes you want to read the next chapter, and it makes me want to actually finish and publish it!

regahro

Posted by regahro 4 years ago Report

Holy wow.. Anna is like the perfect predator <3 love these stories, and can't believe I only found them now. Hopefully it's still ongoing!

TastesUndivided

Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report

This was incredible!!!! I love the dynamic between these 2!! And the teasing is so incredibly well done. Especially when it breaks down!!

thecheese01

Posted by thecheese01 3 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was definitely a fun one for me to write as the first time I ever really indulged in this sort of extended teasing/vore-ish buildup.

TastesUndivided

Posted by TastesUndivided 3 years ago Report

Seriously couldn't tell, cause you're freaking great at it~. Building up teasing is so good!