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The Camping trip (FPC) By noytch -- Report

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This is another what-if scenario that i wrote for Haymanand and his fpc group. again thanks to Haymanand for letting do this type of stuff. also before i forget but the background character originally name was going to be gerald but autocorrect changed it to geary.

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delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 1 year ago Report

Interesting quite not what I was expecting but not bad and a change of pace for where I thought the story would go.

I like it was pretty good.

noytch

Posted by noytch 1 year ago Report

aye thanks, i mostly just free thought out most of this and try to work on weaknesses which were the comedy (dark humor aspect) and the pace of quality over length

delete0n269h

Posted by delete0n269h 1 year ago Report

That’s good to work on anyway helps keep the pace interesting.