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This is another what-if scenario that i wrote for Haymanand and his fpc group. again thanks to Haymanand for letting do this type of stuff. also before i forget but the background character originally name was going to be gerald but autocorrect changed it to geary.
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Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
Interesting quite not what I was expecting but not bad and a change of pace for where I thought the story would go.
I like it was pretty good.
Posted by noytch 4 years ago Report
aye thanks, i mostly just free thought out most of this and try to work on weaknesses which were the comedy (dark humor aspect) and the pace of quality over length
Posted by delete0n269h 4 years ago Report
That’s good to work on anyway helps keep the pace interesting.