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Finally I made animation I feel proud enough to post! This is Valerie! She's a dragon who tends to wear lower cut dresses and shirts.
If you could, please critique this animation, I really want to improve.
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Posted by RandomInjury 4 years ago Report
Very impressive.
As for a Critique, the act of her folding her arms is very jumpy.
It's like 3 frames and it looks like 3 frames.
Da boobis could also use an extra bounce when they free them selves.
Outside that, I can't say too much, of course it needs shading but thats more just something you didn't do at all, rather than something to be improved.
But yes, Fantastic work.
Posted by IndecentIbex 4 years ago Report
Thank you for taking the time to write a critique!
I agree, I could throw in some more frames in certain places, especially on the arms. My goal is to nail down the forms and lines before shading.
I think I'll need to develop a new method of shading strictly for animating because I'm not about to do hours of rendering per frame as I do with my illustrations
Posted by RandomInjury 4 years ago Report
Considering you wanted a critique, I showed this to a friend from Eka's to get his thoughts, but he's embarased by the idea of telling you, so I'll just bring up his critque.
The hands are a bit inconsistant is size and proportion.
And the boob weight could have used work.
So interpreting that criticism.
They aren't really slipping out of the dress, more jumping straight up and out, but then they land and stop dead.
So the first frame where they come out the should probaby only raise about half as high as they do.
Cause the dress is still putting them under preasure, but like, that's too much.