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We're kicking off Nomvember by bringing back a certain hungry mermaid: Lana. It seems like one of those pirates stayed too close to the railing and swiftly got himself trapped between those lips. I don't think asking for parley is going to help him in this situation.
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Posted by Hozomat 4 years ago Report
The shading on the water is a really nice and subtle detail to give depth to the mermaid's body! I also like the lack of water on the abs... She's a sporty one :3
I like her design! I'm just a bit bothered by the abrupt transition from skin to scales on the waist. Feels like a worn piece of cloth and not an actual part of her body. I also think her breasts are a bit to high?
I do like her design nonetheless!
Posted by Mouhr 4 years ago Report
Ah, as observant and constructive as ever.
Now that you point it out, I totally see what you mean with the breasts being too high. And the transitions of body to scales is indeed a bit abrupt. I might actually tweak that in the future.
Thank you for the compliments and the critique. It's really helpful!
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
That's an amazing comment ! Good work ! Inspires me to work more on what I write myself
Posted by SherlokKirya 4 years ago Report
I was waiting for more of this fish since her first "introduction".Hair color combined with these eyes, I am happy uoi played with color scheme on her (I also am in love with anything close to purple, so I can't stop starring at her hair).
Also, at first it confused me who was saying "Parley ?"
Posted by Mouhr 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you like her! And yeah, I can totally see how you might be a little confused by the speech bubble's placement. Whoops.
Posted by Moonlightshadow 4 years ago Report
Oooooooh~
I love this!
Posted by Mouhr 4 years ago Report
I'm glad you do!
Posted by Garber09 4 years ago Report
I don't think I knew this mermaid, but now I do, and I like her.
The pic is very cool, water is nicely done and the point of view is good.
You could try to lower her armpits and breasts a bit, but I guess it's OK to leave this pic as it is and making those changes in the next one.
(What a lucky pirate, tho).
Posted by Mouhr 4 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliments, I'm glad I got the water effect right! Also, thank you for pointing out the brests and armipts. It really seems like something I overlooked. I'll pay special attention to the anatomy in that area with my next drawings.
Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report
I don't remember if I had this answered, is it Lana saying Parley or the one within trying to find safety?
Cause I think it would be hilarious if it's the prey, just casually asking for a hand. Not that concerned with their current predicament.
Posted by Mouhr 2 years ago Report
It is the prey who is calling for parley. It is a bit hard to tell, so I can't blame you for asking.