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Here is my new story, and it's one more story on the Lion King. It is much simpler than the previous ones and mostly "grab and gulp" centered.
Indeed, I wanted to focus on the descriptions, and I am pretty happy with how it turned out.
Simba is trying to eat his first live prey, although his elders say he is way too young for that yet. Of course, he dismisses these critiques, and tries to swallow a mouse. He quickly discovers that live preys tend to fight more than he thought.
Hopefully, he can count on Nala to help him in keeping the mouse down... Or can he ? After all, the two of them had always been rivals as much as they have been friends...
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Posted by Indighost 4 years ago Report
Fun story! I LOVE stories where it's not clear whether predator or prey will "win".
Posted by LightDragon 4 years ago Report
Thanks for commenting, that's really appreciated ^^
I agree on your statement. It's nice to maintain the doubt until late in the story.