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I just found out how to upload narrations to my gallery, so here we go.
This is a little proyect i started a few days ago. I must say, my first languague is spanish, so expect to find some grammar mistakes along the way, don't worry, i'll try to improve it.
I hope to read some comments :D
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Posted by FKBone 4 years ago Report
Interesting story, i like the dynamic of the characters, over it is a very nice story ^^ good job.
Also i havent noticed grammar mistakes, but that could also be because i am not a native english speaker
Posted by MrAramax 4 years ago Report
so a one-eyed person helping a blind man jajajaja thanks for your comment. About the characters, i try to make them look like a feasible cuple, enjoying things together and having preferences of theyr own, like the Chamán Wine (if you like wine, you have to try it, although... i'm not really sure of the price outside of Chile xD).
Again, thanks for your comment :3
Posted by FKBone 4 years ago Report
No Problem, tho i gonna pass on the Wine. I generally dont like alcoholic things so... I lift my glas of Apple juice in your honor XD