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I wrote this because I got really bored. Also, since I'm not a big fan of death, no one dies, spoiler alert.
Edit: If you want to make a comic or animation based on this, go for it, this was originally going to be an animation request, but I couldn't find anyone to request or commission it to.
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Posted by TheAkkoDimensio 4 years ago Report
I won't lie, I really did like this story!
Posted by TheFungus 4 years ago Report
glad to hear it
also, sorry for prodding, what did you like the most and least?
Posted by TheAkkoDimensio 4 years ago Report
No problem! I think my favorite part is the relationships of the characters. Silver caring about Ezo in a manner deeper than friendship (implying romantic feelings), Red visiting/staying with Ezo like they're best friends (almost sisterly is a way), and the happy ending. Those were rather nice.
I would say the only problems I have is that it was rather short, and there wasn't really any spacing between the sentences.
Posted by TheFungus 4 years ago Report
There is spacing, but when I uploaded it, it somehow got removed. So, I don't really know how to fix it.
The romantic feelings were not really intended, but i'm glad you were able to find something like that in this.