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You are a trainer who was shrunken by Melony. She has some fun with you.
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Word Count — 34,567
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A commission for Oblivion55k.
I wrote this back in March 2020 as a 7,263-word story. With Oblivion’s blessing, I decided to use it for an experiment and expanded it into my most ambitious immersive project so far. While I’m not entirely happy with it, I promised it would come December 31st, so here it is on December 30th.
Some may find the story boring, and that’s fine.
I’d like to do another story like this in the future. It probably won’t have as long of an “Awakening” section, but we’ll see. I learned a lot while working on this and I intend on using those lessons in my next big project.
Special thanks to Nozo and
Natsukashii for editing help.
Table of contents breakdown:
Awakening
Intro to the main character and his backstory. Heavy focus on sensory immersion.
Exploration
Examination of main character’s surroundings and intro to Melony.
Battle
Nonfatal breast and butt crushing.
Consumption
Mawplay, sexual content, and vore.
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MOBILE: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GV118wNIjBOs2n2R3vKqRCLGvkzrMLF160UggIbY7-k/edit?usp=sharing
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Visual aid for the characters
Melony: https://img.fireden.net/vip/image/1591/51/1591512102851.jpg
Melony and shota: https://static8.hentai-img.com/upload/20191122/599/612526/42.jpg
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Posted by Nozo 4 years ago Report
This is an incredible story! Your experiment definitely paid off - it’s immersive in a very different way than any other size story I’ve read. Incredible stuff - you ought to be very proud of yourself
Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
Thanks! : D
Posted by Phintal 4 years ago Report
I love the mouthplay detail!
Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
Thanks! : D
Posted by GiantessVM 4 years ago Report
Amazing story! Left me wishing for more!
Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
Thanks! : D
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
The first half of this was incredibly effective at creating a long lasting sense of confusion. The protagonist slowly working back senses and memories bit by bit was fascinating.
The other half involved sexual content of an underage character and unfortunately that took the steam right out of my sails as I read through.
Still, this is clearly very detailed in the writing.
Posted by lllll1337 4 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, underage characters in sexual situations definitely isn't for everyone. I'm hoping to write something similar to this in the future that doesn't have that.
Posted by rotta287 4 years ago Report
That would be interesting to see for sure.