Well, not trying to be an asshole just trying to give my honest opinion, i look at it and two things comes to mind.
1. she has no neck
or
2. her neck is super thin and you can bearly see it.
plus if i'm looking with the cubes we normally use for sketch drawings, you can see that her shoulders would be seen, while her neck would be somewhat hidden by her head.(Especially when that box she's sitting on points out that we should see the drawing from a top down point of view.)
Again, not trying to make enemies, just trying to give what little i know for any of your future drawings.
Upon seeing the conversation, I do agree with the criticism but there is a problem. The left arm or the arm with the phone in hand is particularly dislocated, and especially relative to the neck itself. That is also for criticism, and I hope it's helpful
Posted by ThefoxMask 4 years ago Report
I'm sorry, but wheres the neck again?
Posted by Neptune99 4 years ago Report
In this perspective the neck is not visible, not only because of the camera position but also because of the breasts.
Posted by Neptune99 4 years ago Report
although it seems that the shoulders are very wide xd
Posted by ThefoxMask 4 years ago Report
Well, not trying to be an asshole just trying to give my honest opinion, i look at it and two things comes to mind.
1. she has no neck
or
2. her neck is super thin and you can bearly see it.
plus if i'm looking with the cubes we normally use for sketch drawings, you can see that her shoulders would be seen, while her neck would be somewhat hidden by her head.(Especially when that box she's sitting on points out that we should see the drawing from a top down point of view.)
Again, not trying to make enemies, just trying to give what little i know for any of your future drawings.
Posted by Neptune99 4 years ago Report
Don't worry, actually thanks for commenting on that, I may have made the neck smaller.
I will review these things for other drawings.
Posted by 4thedegen 1 year ago Report
Upon seeing the conversation, I do agree with the criticism but there is a problem. The left arm or the arm with the phone in hand is particularly dislocated, and especially relative to the neck itself. That is also for criticism, and I hope it's helpful
Posted by Makazawa 4 years ago Report
Nice and safe belly~
Great work~
Posted by Neptune99 4 years ago Report
Thanks ^^