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Another mishap towards Kyousuke and Kirino, when Kyousuke was being stuck inside of her little sister's stomach. While he was calling Kuroneko for help, but she is already in front of their house, while Kirino was doing playing her game with a little distracted along the way. Kirino figures it out, that her annoying older brother calls Kuroneko.
Then she feels that she wants to do something for her, and instructs her older brother to do so. Meaningless, Kuroneko being swallowed by his little sister. And Kuroneko finally meets Kyousuke inside of his little sister's stomach. Kuroneko feels serious toward Kyousuke, hope they are not feeling well being inside of there.
Kirino Kousaka, Kyousuke Kousaka, and Ruri "Kuroneko" Gotou from My Little Sister Can't Be This Cute.
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Posted by MugenNoSaga 4 years ago Report
Pretty interesting story you made here, butt there are some parts that need some polish. For example some parts are written as if Kirino is also Kuroneko's sister and others that made me think that Kirino also eat herself.
Hope this feedback helps you for future stories.
Posted by UraniumCore92 4 years ago Report
Well, that makes sense but if you read some light novel or watch it, Kirino can be her sister and Kuroneko can be vice versa or per se.
Posted by dajordanator 4 years ago Report
I can confirm, just from the title and description, that if i were to try and read this it would be very confusing just from the weird and incomplete sentence structure. I'm going to guess English is not your first language. Dont take this as discouragement, keep writing, but your english definitely meeds some work.