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Aaaand second story of the day, I'm on a roll! This was a gifted short for a friend over at Discord, in this particular case it has been all me but I've thought about posting Roleplays that I do over there after polishing them a bit to make them more readable.
Anyways, when and if I do so, I will give credit to my partners and of course ask for their permission, until then, enjoy my lewd writing.
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Posted by Nightshadow101 4 years ago Report
honestly, one of the best i've read
mostly cause its short, and simple. its got such detail though to it!
Posted by Dragonitas 4 years ago Report
I try to not include anything that's unnecessary in a story, it's fine if people want to have longer paragraphs but if you go overboard it feels too much like padding and gets me out of the experience.
I'm glad that you liked it!
Posted by TootCore 1 year ago Report
Love how casual this one is, and how the digestion takes it's time. Carrying live prey away is so fun, too many go for a near instant, fast digestion on the spot.
Posted by Dragonitas 1 year ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I understand the appeal of instant digestion for a quick fap story, or if that's the intention. But taking your time gives me a more satisfying payoff at the end~