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A waitress is having a dull evening, when a polite request shatters the monotomy.
I can't decide whether to add an elaborated digestion scene to this. Part of me likes leaving it open to the reader's imagination. Another part of me thinks maybe go more explicit.
I dunno. I might reupload it later with one.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
yes definitely add the digestive sequence, but rather as a separate story , that way this stays open .
also I'm surprised by the ending since I thought by the way it was going , tina would've became sentient fat or even reformed. but I love this story . its the kind that deserves a comic
Posted by EloquentOrc 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the kind words. Comments always makes it more fun to write :)
Oh yeah, I won't delete this one, just upload a new post with an altered name. Could have been more clear x)
Your comment about sentient fat/reformation kinda sparked something. I didn't originally intend it, but there may be a alternate ending/sequel, maybe.
Posted by Diversity23 2 years ago Report
I've really enjoyed this story, and I can't even imagine how smoothly and intimate the digestion sequence was. So looking forward to potentially see it added ^^.
By the way, you've been eloquent enough to get a new watcher, so congrats ;p
Posted by EloquentOrc 2 years ago Report
That makes me very happy to hear :).
I am definitely adding a digestion scene, probably more. Not sure when, as I have other stuff I am working on too, but it will come eventually.
Posted by Diversity23 2 years ago Report
Don't worry though, take your time to write stories you want to write. We're not eager to this it right now, so this is not a big deal ^^
Posted by EloquentOrc 2 years ago Report
Hehe, don't worry. I wouldn't write it if it wasn't what I wanted to.
Posted by Kadaj823 2 years ago Report
What a nice story. I would love to read more like this.
Posted by EloquentOrc 2 years ago Report
Thank you. :) There will be more of this story. Not a sequel exactly, but more.
Also, I am not sure what you liked, but it has several of the themes I like to write about, so there is a good chance it will reappear in future stories.