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Miss Koishi Is Coming To Eat You Right Away! By nyttyn -- Report

When Satori Komeiji gets a phone call from her sister, she assumes it's just a prank. Unfortuantely for her, it's anything but, and things turn real spooky real fast.


A commission from an anonymous benefactor! This one is pretty experimental, it's my first time trying to write something a bit more horror-focused, so if you liked it, hated it, whatever, please leave me a comment telling me more!

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Simplespectator

Posted by Simplespectator 4 months ago Report

So I’m not really familiar with the source material, but I simply must tip my cap for this amazing work. The horror elements make for some fantastic build up. Some seriously good stuff there. The swallowing itself was a little fast, and the slight humor was a little off putting, but probably in character. Still, nothing detracts from the strengths. Thank you very kindly.

nyttyn

Posted by nyttyn 1 month ago Report

Thanks! It's my first time writing horror, so I'm glad it landed well.

TableManners

Posted by TableManners 4 months ago Report

Fantastic work - very unique =)

nyttyn

Posted by nyttyn 1 month ago Report

Thank you for your kind words! That's koi-fish for ya...

Xylead

Posted by Xylead 3 months ago Report

Very well done way of writing Koishis third eye powers with the phone, loved this story!

nyttyn

Posted by nyttyn 1 month ago Report

Thank you! Never underestimate the power of a little pebble on the side of the road.

somnustechnician

Posted by somnustechnician 1 month ago Report

This is incredible, the way it ramps up is wonderfully menacing and a treat to read.

nyttyn

Posted by nyttyn 1 month ago Report

Appreciate it! Every horror tale needs tension, so I'm glad the ramp up landed.