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hello there! i have written a few short stories for some of the images i commission and thought maybe i should give writing a proper go. so here it is
i suppose you can think of this as a sorta origin story for my retail characters Marcella and Clarence.
is it bad? is it good? is it meh? please give it a try and tell me what you think! :)
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Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
I really, really wish there was punctuation and quotation marks and such, but it was actually a good read nonetheless
Posted by fastwaffle 3 years ago Report
i really appreciate the feedback! i'm glad you could still enjoy the story despite those flaws!
Posted by AnAccount 3 years ago Report
I wouldn't go so far as to call that a flaw just an oversight. Also, really enjoy accomplice stuff like this
Posted by noctua337 3 years ago Report
When does come a second part? ????
Posted by fastwaffle 3 years ago Report
i don't know, i didn't think people were very interested, so i haven't been writing anything. i guess i could try to write more and see what happens.
Posted by noctua337 3 years ago Report
Yes pls xD
Posted by leonthegreat 1 year ago Report
I would love to read a part two to this as well.
Posted by fastwaffle 1 year ago Report
im glad you liked my story enough to want a part 2. i'm actually about 90% done with the next chapter, so it might not be long until i post it.
Posted by leonthegreat 1 year ago Report
:)