I noticed you called Willowflight Willowpelt and Darkwing Darkstripe, both only on one occasion. Those were ThunderClan cats! You should probably fix that.
That was a mistake on my part that I noticed, but I made some later stories with them so it would be more difficult. That's partly why I dropped the story.
Posted by UncleRippu 3 years ago Report
accidentally put this in male pred bro
Posted by ShadeScrambler 3 years ago Report
Fixed. I did this post on my phone, probably the reason for the error.
Posted by Purrloin 3 years ago Report
Strange to see a Warriors-themed story with no -star cat in it. But other than that you did rather well for your first story. Good job.
Posted by Purrloin 3 years ago Report
I noticed you called Willowflight Willowpelt and Darkwing Darkstripe, both only on one occasion. Those were ThunderClan cats! You should probably fix that.
Posted by ShadeScrambler 3 years ago Report
That was a mistake on my part that I noticed, but I made some later stories with them so it would be more difficult. That's partly why I dropped the story.