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jinako wishes to prove that karna is the best servant by voring.
i have not written much vore bevore.
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Posted by chewchulainn 3 years ago Report
A+ Vore babe ilysm <3 You did a really good job writing the details of the prey being eaten and the digestion- I especially loved how Nero had already started digesting by the time Archer was eating, and how it didn't all happen at once but was just progressing throughout as Karna ate. It was a really nice touch! Jinako's characterization was super cute also, I loved all her little references and just talking about everything like it was a game. But her reactions throughout it all were really great too, and the end with her rubbing Karna's stomach was very sweet ;o; You did a really great job!! ^^
Posted by ryeowookluv 3 years ago Report
thank you so much i would die for you