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A day to forget By bestgirlRosa -- Report

Just a RP with a friend that has been modified to be a viewable story for others. I know it's not good, and certainly far from perfect, but any comments or critique are very much welcome.

Rosa is my character, though was modified to be a mini-giantess for this rp/eventual story specifically.
Aurora belongs to an old friend on Discord.
6,504 words long.

Thanks :)


This is my first post, so I'm still getting used to things, and the thumbnail is an old picrew that I made of Rosa.

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Raiden556

Posted by Raiden556 3 years ago Report

Very good stuff mate especially enjoyed the last little dashing of hope for the prey as her request was denied so casually hope to see more stuff from you in the future and welcome to the portal btw :)

bestgirlRosa

Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report

Thank ya !
I’m glad ya enjoyed it :))

Raesetsu

Posted by Raesetsu 3 years ago Report

I love your digestion details. One of my favorite parts, and another favorite of mine is an indifferent pred. Absolutely love it!

bestgirlRosa

Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report

Thanks :)
I felt I conveyed it pretty well glad to know others feel the same! Expect a bit more of both in the near future, after a few personal things I'm working on :3

bestgirlRosa

Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report

Thank you :3
Glad you liked it !!

TinyBoiSnack

Posted by TinyBoiSnack 3 years ago Report

I enjoyed this, I love that she wasted no time just gulping her down, and then proceeded to just slosh her about and burp to exclaim dominance xD

bestgirlRosa

Posted by bestgirlRosa 3 years ago Report

Thank ya !
Just something about a pred who doesn't care about her food's life is so wonderful :3

TinyBoiSnack

Posted by TinyBoiSnack 3 years ago Report

Yeah. Especially the entire process. "hmm. No buy food. You are tasty enough already." Is just the mood. Envy for the prey xD

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 2 years ago Report

Simple but good writing and descriptions.

Zelda

Posted by Zelda 2 years ago Report

Hands down my favorite story on this site. Great work

BrightSideDown

Posted by BrightSideDown 2 years ago Report

omg the gulp and digestion sequences were GODLIKE