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So I've finally decided to post something, took me long enough. Been a user of the site for years, so thought it was about time I helped contribute to the site.
Please don't be too harsh, this is my first time attempting a vore story so I'd love to hear any feedback!
I would also like to thank users Coolwoman, Draconatedz, TwrchTwryth and DoubleOsnake for inspiring me to try writing.
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Posted by jrogelio1 3 years ago Report
i think nozomi should digest miki, if it goes to the stomach is food
Posted by Partiallygore 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I decided to leave this ending down to the readers interpretation since the original had a fixed ending
Posted by thequietmanno1 3 years ago Report
personally, i'm ok with the ' she's stuck in there and all attempts to get her out result in Nozomi instinctually devouring other lady in some fashion' ending
Posted by Kurczak48 3 years ago Report
- That's the neat part, you don't.
Pretty nice story, accidental AV is amazing in it's own right, but it's fun reading shorter bits like that. And surprisingly small amount of Keijo vore only makes it even nicer addition to the site!
Posted by Partiallygore 3 years ago Report
Thanks I mostly just tried to have fun with writing these stories, which resulted in more silly stories than initially planned. And honestly, it's a shame there isn't more Keijo vore on the site, so much potential
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
Pretty good, Definitely hope to see more. Also do you to take commissions or requests?
Posted by Partiallygore 3 years ago Report
Hi, I'm still new to writing so I don't believe I'm good enough for any commissions yet, maybe one day in the future! :D
Posted by Ihatehater1994 3 years ago Report
Nice story so far