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Hey all, I'm finally back with another story for you. This one is (hopefully) going to be the prologue to at least one more story, hopefully more, featuring this same character.
I tried something a bit different for a change, something I've been wanting to try for a while, and that's animal prey. I've been liking "feral" stuff a lot recently, and this felt like natural conclusion to that. So as always, READ THE TAGS, in case any of it isn't your thing, since I tag fairly heavily.
ALSO, if you're someone who animal prey isn't your cup of tea, and you like only human prey, then stay tuned, because I intend to make that the focus of the main "series" for this new character of mine, Brendan.
Oh, and if it wasn't obvious, thumbnail isn't my art.
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Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report
This is fantastic!!!! Great job!
I love the choice of words and childish curiosity and wonder. Teasing and experimentation with a nice bit of world and character building. Especially loved the desperate dash at the end and warlike descriptions. Belch talking was adorable and entertaining and I just love it all.
Posted by Vanthony 3 years ago Report
Glad to hear it :-) I was also very proud of all those scenes.
Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report
You should be proud. I apologize for gushing a bit, but you write very well on a number of niche things that are hard to find. Many thumbs up from me.
Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report
Also got to say I love the image you use for Brendan. Can just imagine him sitting casually in that hoodie and leaning back to hike his legs up and let rip.
Posted by Vanthony 3 years ago Report
Unfortunately I never found the original source of the image. This is as far as I got. https://imgur.com/Wefd08z
I also have the next two stories vaguely workshopped, but I haven't had the motivation yet to write them. Maybe that changes soon idk. Hopefully.
Posted by Xenophage17 3 years ago Report
Know Source or not it's a great image and really helps the story. As for the future, I would be lying if I said I wasn't hopeful. But I firmly believe artists should only create when they feel inspired and truly want to. Do let me know if my comments apply undue stress or are annoying.
Posted by Vanthony 3 years ago Report
Not at all. If anything, it's motivating.