Posted by ExistentialRowlet 3 years ago Report

Good story. Don't read much dom like this but it was a good read none the less.
In the future you may want to proof read it a bit more. The english is a little broken in places.

Posted by Galarn 3 years ago Report

Thanks for reading <3
I know, I'm still learning as I write. I also write non lewd stuff and I try my best but its hard, mostly because when you write stories you use different words than when you speak with people.

Posted by Skullhammer123 3 years ago Report

Pretty good. Though whats with the endo tag? I dont think Ruby likes being inside Cindy's stomach very much. Think it would've been better if it was more unwilling to willing but thats just preference i guess. Also, how do you forget about an entire person being in your stomach lol.

Posted by Galarn 3 years ago Report

Oh, I thought endo would apply to unwilling tho haha, I removed it. And well, you could say she forgot as she just didn't think about her anymore

Posted by SilentMight 3 years ago Report

It still does apply, endo is just when prey are kept safe/undigested in the pred. Pretty certain willingness doesn't have anything to do with it

Posted by Galarn 3 years ago Report

Hmm yeah, isn't there a tag for forced endo then? in order to not confuse anyone...

Posted by M4st3r0fb41t 3 years ago Report

People usually refer to that as entrapment around here

Posted by Luffredd 2 years ago Report

Nice story. Though I thought it was going to end with analvore while she was eating that ass.

Posted by Galarn 2 years ago Report

Thanks! hehe~

Posted by Gendor 1 year ago Report

I noticed a few sentences that sounded like the wrong word was used, or a misspell like "Slidedl" which I think is just "Slid", but, I like it!

Posted by Galarn 1 year ago Report

Yes, I don't pride myself on the grammar of these stories, but thanks! I might write more sometime ????