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In a time before time, two heroes find themselves captured by a sorceress that delights in consuming and enslaving any that cross her. Can they escape the Huntress of Knights before she claims them, body and soul?
This was a prototype story, of sorts; my first try that eventually became the "Uteromancer Unfettered" side story. If you've read the other story, you'll probably notice a couple of parallels; in fact, the characters Tipheret and Binah were originally called Berrith and Ainwyn, familiar names if you've read 'Uteromancer Unfettered'. I decided that it was a waste to just let the story rot in my WIP folder, so after a few edits I present it to you. It's far from my best work, but I hope you enjoy regardless, and if you did, please comment and tell me as such! I do love to hear your feedback. :)
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Posted by wiseguy288 3 years ago Report
Really cool story. Love seeing vore in high fantasy stories
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Glad to know you liked it. :)
Posted by acrylic 3 years ago Report
Great story
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Thank you :)
Posted by acrylic 3 years ago Report
May I ask if the huntress have a motif character?
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
I'm not sure what a 'motif character' is, I'm afraid. :')
Posted by acrylic 3 years ago Report
A certain character that you borrowed traits or appearance to creare your own character(huntress in this case)
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Well, she was originally conceived as the first uteromancer, of sorts, so she has a lot of the same physical traits as Artemis/Alicia from the Born Again series. Beyond that, she wasn't inspired by any one character. :P
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
As a concept itself, tag wise. Like the thought of a predator's 'belly' bloating over time, as they store more and more ovaries, or eggs past their 'prime'. Or in preparation for implantation..
As for the story. Well, nice horror vibe. Probably may wish that the 'soul pearls' are potentially used, or transmuted into becoming 'more' children, padding wise. Or possibly used as fuel/sacrifice for an eventual 'ultimate' egg, or soul. "Heir" wise?
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Thanks for your comments :) this is just a one-off that I didn't want to leave unused so probably not gonna be expanded upon, sorry. :')
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Stillcan't help but think if this draft ever got expanded, the witch's "reborn" children would probably grow into a 'legion' of unbirthing dark witches, having a collect-a-thon, no doubt... Before there's a possibility their true mother, might just collect them again, or have them 'implant' their own collected eggs/ovaries to her diminished collection, sort of deal...
But hey, it's already pretty horrific, as a one-off. Before again, those soul pearls could end up having a 'use', to some erotic horror standard. :)
And the cherry on top, being "Physogastrism". Wish that had more focus as a story idea, but without the expelled eggs. Or possibly a hint of having a massive collection of regressed eggs?
Posted by acrylic 3 years ago Report
I did not understand some of the story.
If the victim’s spirit and consciousness(sentient) is within the sperm part, what does the egg part in the huntress’ ovaries do?
What does the ovum part mean to the victims and the huntress if the sperm part is all that is needed to regrow the victim and can even hold the victim’s spirit, life and consciousness?
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Good question, to be honest. This is one of those things that I myself questioned while writing, and hence why the story isn't canon. :)
I suppose that the Huntress of Knights- like canon uteromancers- has the power to move souls and minds into whichever gamete she wishes, and her preference is to keep the ovum as a trophy within her while the soul is kept in a separate location so it can't try and rebel against her or something like that?
Posted by pendingdelet9024239vb4 3 years ago Report
This is probably one of my favorite UB stories. I just love fantasy themed ones.
What I really want though is a drawing of the characters, especially the demoness. Her constantly changing hair color is incredibly unique. When you say she has white skin, is it pure white, or just palish?
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
I would say it's a unnatural pale. Not quite fluorescent white but close. :P
Posted by SwordkingX5 3 years ago Report
I enjoyed this story a lot.
Do wish we could have seen the part with Tipheret and the Huntress.