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A guy with some pent up desires finally goes after what he wants most.
So this is my first story. First post on eka's even! I certainly don't plan on making it the last ether. I thought this would be a good way to pass the time while I had to be quarantined.
I thought we could use some extra Male Pred content on here, and I had this idea floating around in my head for a while. Tell me if you like it, tell me if you don't like it, I love a good criticism.
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Posted by Justsomeone 3 years ago Report
Good story, I liked it a lot. The only criticism I'd have is not enough focus on digestion!
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
Yea, you're probably right. I kind of liked the "walkin' into the sunset" type ending, but it may have been a missed opportunity.
Rest assured my next story (whenever that will be) will have some good ol' digestion!
Posted by Justsomeone 3 years ago Report
M/F as well? >.>
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
Perhaps... (≖ ͜ʖ≖)
Posted by CowboyHat 3 years ago Report
Nice work! I always enjoy some more m/f content and I like the casual betrayal. Looking forward to seeing more stuff from you in the future. :)
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
I'm working on it son, don't you worry!
Posted by Voric501 3 years ago Report
Really good first story! Definitely happy to have more M/F authors among us!
Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report
Fun little story.
Posted by DonburiBowl 2 years ago Report
Superb story, always love when someone's girlfriend is eaten up by a pred!