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So, I've been lurking here from time to time for a long while, and thought that I could share a little something at least :D.
Hope somebody likes it!
The thumbnail is from a picture by Xcel-zero on deviantart, and I do not own it.
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Posted by bwill194 3 years ago Report
This was great, excellent writing. Would love to see more of Malin in the future!!
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
I do have some plans in store with his character ;)
Posted by Tylerdurden328 3 years ago Report
Agreed with the comment above, excellent writing. Would like to see more.
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Thanks alot! I plan on writing more!
Posted by 101danmnations 3 years ago Report
I too agree.
Great story. Would love to see more!
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Thanks alot! I'm glad people liked it so much!
Posted by pbysteria 3 years ago Report
really nice story, the burp of relief and bone snapping was super
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
To be honest, that part is my favourite as well
Posted by HentaiMaster90000 3 years ago Report
would be interesting to see how the girl got in there. maybe a half-follow-up?
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
I actually did this story once before but managed to accidentally delete it. In that one the whole background to Malin's predicament was revealed over the course of the story as she remembered more and more, and for the moment I just felt like rewriting the part only taking place in the present. I'm thinking about finishing that part as a kind of prequel though!
Posted by HentaiMaster90000 3 years ago Report
Her remembering it would be really hot though. If you don't mind, could you dm me the version you accidentally deleted?
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
I wish I could. I was going to copy the entire story into another document, and decided to close Word. I got this popup asking if I wanted to save a copy, and didn't realize it meant the ctrl+C I just did. So I deleted the original file, and then tried to ctrl+V into the new document.
Boy, was I disappointed when it dawned upon me that I'd just deleted thousands of words worth of text.
Posted by HentaiMaster90000 3 years ago Report
that's a real shame. If you ever rewrite it, when do you think that will be?
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Don't know yet. I have another story I'm working on currently, but I'll revisit Malin in the future though.
Posted by unfamiliarnostalgia1235 3 years ago Report
I too would like to see the prequel on how that girl got inside Malin :)
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Now THAT is something I'm working on though, to compensate for the lost content :)
Posted by Tsavo 3 years ago Report
I loooove this story. Inexperienced pred who slowly falls in love with vore over the course of the story? Lurid details? Bone breaking? This has it all. <3
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
I wasn't prepared for all this good feedback xD, thanks! And yeah, these kinds of stories are my favourites as well, and I wanted to make something just like it!
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Whoa, thanks to all of you! At first I thought the format was ruined, as it looks way better in the original document, and I wasn't too sure about my writing. I'm glad you like it :D
Posted by Amagi2 3 years ago Report
I will also throw in my words of encouragement. I love the lengthy digestion both written and implied towards the end. Usually I really appreciate some back and forth between the pred and their prey, but it was actually pretty great having them so thoroughly muffled in this one. This gets a watch from me!
Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report
This was a good and entertaining read, how you described Malin's feelings as her first time in the vore and her pleasure at feeling that girl in her belly was a visual delight, keep it up, champ.
Posted by Guest14456 3 years ago Report
Fuck yes ! This is exactly the type of digestion I'm craving for. I've been reading vore stories for years and that's the first time I see someone with tastes so similar to mine.
It was a very good read. I really hope to see more from you !!
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Thanks! One of the reasons I started writing this was because I felt the same, that there wasn't just enough of this kind of vore!
Posted by NightUltranium3 3 years ago Report
Aye this was something good to read, I feel bad for the prey though... I'd honestly love to see an alternative ending to this, but that'd be askin' for a lot, can't wait to see what other stuff you bring to this community!
Posted by CodeBlue 3 years ago Report
Well just maybe I might, who knows ;). I'll revisit this character at least!
Posted by Bod67 3 years ago Report
Very enjoyable
Posted by Zurgare2000 1 year ago Report
This is one of my favorite stories, I'm really looking forward to a prequel to this.
Posted by CodeBlue 1 year ago Report
I have not abandoned that plan, so stay tuned!