HA! I MANAGED TO GET A STORY OUT BEFORE THE HOLIDAY WAS OVER!!! SU-
*Ahem*
I mean, Hoo boy was this something. I came up with this scenario like a week before Christmas, started typing, fleshed out the story as i went, and here i am posting it around 1 hour and 30 minutes before midnight. Anyway be sure to take a good look at the warning, This is my most darkest story I have written so far. I could write something far darker down the road.
One thing I should mention is the writing style. I was going for a sort of perspective, where the person is actually the narrator, where they only describe things that pop out to them, or they can't describe it all due to them not getting a good enough look, and not someone else who narrates every single detail that they go through. I would actually like some feedback in regards to this sort of writing style, but please try and keep it positive.
Anyway, Merry Christmas everybody!
P.S. Told you I would proofread it before 2022
P.P.S. I was going to do a picture for the thumbnail, but as i was continuing to do bits and pieces of it, I suddenly realized "Huh...I'm not going to make this in time for Christmas." I do plan on finishing it though!...eventually.

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