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I just decided to create another story and may finish another one this week. Again, I am new and would appreciate comments and inputs.

There is not a lot of Futurama on this site so I made one. I felt the 1st half seemed like a script for an actual episode, just bootlegged. What are your thoughts? Did I capture the mood of Futurama?

Also if you haven't guessed, I have a particular favourite type of prey which I will not do all the time (probably most).

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BigBobbyBlobtheSlob

Posted by BigBobbyBlobtheSlob 3 years ago Report

I can say for certain you captured the tone of the show fairly well in my opinion, I can actually see this as an actual episode fetish and all. Well done, hope to see more like it.

ecufan360

Posted by ecufan360 3 years ago Report

would love a part 2 that showed fry and new leela more and digestion if your int it but really liked the story the it really felt like the charecters