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Canon: Warrior Cats
Tigerstar pred/POV prey
Contains: ?/M, digestion, cruelty, belching
Decided to write a vore story again for the first time in ages, plus I gave some prey pov content a try since it's something I've never done before.
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Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report
Very fun story! It is fun to see more WarriorCats vore around (as it seems to be quite a rarity despite many off the felines being attractive in both roles) and I think you chose a perfect pred for a POV scenario like this.
Tigerstar works perfect to bully and digest the poor reader and I quite like how you handled the reader POV. Descriptions like the swallowing and stomach were nice, and I especially love how you used the belches. They were well-timed and well-written, and it felt like you had some very good noises/onomatopoeias picked out for them. I will be very excited to see more of this in the future!
A small nitpick, though- tagging the piece as ?/M makes it seem like an unknown/reader character is the predator, where as you said the reader is the prey. In the future, you should likely tag male predator/reader content as M/?.
Aside from that, though, all is fantastic! Very good work and I can't wait to see more.
Posted by NamelessLurker 3 years ago Report
Very nice. I don't know what exactly you did to do this, but the whole scenario somehow felt ... more real than expected? Don't know how to say this, but I very much enjoyed it (and I think I'm missing out not knowing anything about Warrior Cats)