Saber casually letting out huge burps is good, but the way you included (which fits her personality) her getting ashamed and apologizing-- It's a touch a lot of people forget about on something that's already just a touch on vore itself. I like your appreciation for the finer things.
Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report
Oh man, Saber and Rin vore. I actually liked this one a lot, looking forward to seeing what you bring next!
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Posted by rxc 3 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading.
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Posted by TheMystique 3 years ago Report
Saber casually letting out huge burps is good, but the way you included (which fits her personality) her getting ashamed and apologizing-- It's a touch a lot of people forget about on something that's already just a touch on vore itself. I like your appreciation for the finer things.
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Posted by rxc 3 years ago Report
Yes, keeping the characters in their personalities is something I strive for... I'm glad I was convincing this time.
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Posted by Cactaur98 3 years ago Report
HOLY CRAP! This is the best Saber story ever written, hands down! Excellent work!
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Posted by rxc 3 years ago Report
Oh! That's a great compliment, thank you very much!
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