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Daphne & Talia Remake part 3 By tredur -- Report

Daphne wakes up the day after and takes control of the situation

The first chapter of this saga is "Daphne & Talia Remake part 1" https://aryion.com/g4/view/695806


The previous chapter of this saga is "Daphne & Talia Remake part 2.5"
https://aryion.com/g4/view/724138

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Mrinfo

Posted by Mrinfo 3 years ago Report

This is definitely a sad chapter, but it is also a lesson in love. Love is a two way street and just forcing yourself onto someone is unlikely to yield any good results. You gotta get their trust first. In the original story, Daphne had been given time to understand that Talia was unfamiliar with human culture and meant no harm. Here Talia went WAY too fast and didn’t cultivate any trust what so ever before binding with Daphne.

tredur

Posted by tredur 3 years ago Report

The first concept draft that I send to Doombeez this was all there. However, Doombeez was very explicit on the dislike of the forcefulness of their firsts encounters so it got change and now I want to explore the first idea more.
The next chapters will be less sad then this one but this first encounters will be remembered by the characters and both will have to work to change the impression that each left to the other.
The first person prospective was chosen to emphases that each just knows what each understand of the other.
Glad you are liking the story so far and also Doombeez version.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

Oh hell yes, this the juicy drama I live for! I legit cant get enough of the tension between the two. If its anything like the first version, the time when they make up is gonna be so cathartic.

tredur

Posted by tredur 3 years ago Report

you will have to wait and see, their relationship it's going to be weird but in time it's going to be better.
before part 4 I should work on Taylor and Vale extended to present better how The Hospital works and how things have change since their early days working there but maybe it will be postponed for a while, in the meantime thank you