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I'm not dead :)
I'd love to spend more time typing away at my keyboard, but I've got bills to pay, and don't exactly have enough of a cult following to turn this 'writing' gig into a full-time job. If you like my work, let me know if you'd be willing to contribute. And hey, if you really like my work, then tell your friends; I can't overstate how important publicity is.
I originally started writing this as a quick one-off, but as the ideas kept flowing, it got longer and longer. After a few hours, I realized I still had plenty of space for creative liberties, and decided to throw it up on the portal to let everyone know I'm still alive and kicking. It may be a departure from Earidime Chronicles, but then again, I don't exactly have any motivation to return to that project yet.
For now, I hope you enjoy a taste of Serana's new life as the world's first successfully genetically modified human. I thoughly enjoyed writing this, and really want to see what others think of the subject matter. My gratitude to anyone who comments, especially those who can critique my work. Lord knows I can't get enough critics.
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Posted by ggg74 3 years ago Report
Really interesting so far sorry I can’t offer much in terms of critique but I’m really looking forward to more!
Posted by Whereaminow27 3 years ago Report
I am pretty darn sure, she could get some help with her Appetite if she would just spit the Girl out of her stomach.
Posted by PrismaticAria 3 years ago Report
I wouldn’t say her appetite is the biggest issue here~ She does get a pass this time, though; I know I wouldnt want to go through an existenial crisis on an empty stomach~
Posted by Schmidtyyy 3 years ago Report
very interesting start. Will you continue with her story or will this switch between different ,,test subjects''
Posted by Lawrence Craft 3 years ago Report
Because the story is named "That Time I Became a Lamia: Chapter 1", I would assume, that there maybe more chapters in the future, mainly centered around her.
Well, adding more characters / "test subjects" or side stories is always a possibilty.
Posted by FitMe 3 years ago Report
This was such a blast to read! Oh my god, it just completely floored me! You have a talent for writing that animalistic side of a predator, and I really can't get enough of it!
Posted by PrismaticAria 3 years ago Report
Why, thank you! I very much enjoyed writing this chapter, and am looking forward to experimenting with my style. I’ve always loved pausing to reflect in media, so finding a balance between emotions, smut, and progression is a critical task I'm trying my hardest to maintain. If I may ask, what was your favorite paragraph? Or, if one is too limiting, then what was your favorite description?
Posted by Phant0m5 2 years ago Report
This is fantastic, thanks for sharing!
But wasn't there a part 2 as well? It disappeared...
Posted by AlexBrymm 2 years ago Report
This is so good! I absolutely adored this one, you really captured a lot of emotions with that first person perspective and it was super compelling to read. I really like the way that you described all those dominant thrills, that was really exciting. And poor Serana... I just want to give her a happy willing meal so she can be all content and full.
This is absolutely a new favorite and it's inspired a few ideas of my own! I really hope you share more; I relate to struggling to find time to write things, but I'd be incredibly excited to read more work from you. You did fantastic!