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The Knight of Avarice By Dakon -- Report

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My first story. And the first part of what I intend to be a much larger tale.

A Crown Princess, once heir to a mighty empire, finds herself capture by bandits. Sometime later the bandits are attack by one of the world's scariest, and hungriest legends. Will this mysterious prove the princess's salvation or her doom?

Criticism and feedback are always appreciated.

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

Well consider me hooked! Good stuff for an intro, love how Philipa just slowly comes to terms with it all.

Dakon

Posted by Dakon 2 years ago Report

Thank You! Glad to have a fan. Won't be the POV for coming chapters but I definitely want to feature the dynamic between Philipa and Olivia. Because Olivia definitely holds all the cards now, but Philipa is a survivor.

argdhal

Posted by argdhal 2 years ago Report

Very interested in this scenario and these characters.