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Happy Vore Day! I've wanted to make a Vore Day upload for some time now. I was disappointed to miss it last year, but I got it in this year.
This story takes place in a modern fantasy world, one loosely based on fairy tales. I initially did this story with Ai Dungeon, and rewrote it into the version above. I like the premise of a prey who wants to convince a predator who is just a normal person, but also a pred kind of species to swallow them whole and alive and digest them.
As always, I appreciate comments and constructive criticism. What part of this story did you like best? Was there a part that didn't work for you? What could have made it better. Feel free to comment. Also I'm going to not put spaces between the paragraphs this time, let me know if you think that is good or if it is better with the spaces.
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Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
Very nice work! Excellent descriptions, and I did enjoy the confused predator.
Posted by Thatonedragonguy 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I appreciate it.